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The Sin Ledger of Hollowfoot Pass
Chapter 4
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Panel 2

Mid-peak waystation courtyard after the noon rest; cold blue-grey stone, wagons, south gate in the distance, north well in shadow.

Panel 3

Yan reviews the permit irregularity and prepares the conditions for the confrontation without directly accusing Pei.

Panel 4

Transit log table near the guard post, earlier in the setup. Yan gives Guard Chen just enough information.

Panel 5

Yan deliberately establishes his alibi at the north well during the rest stage.

Panel 6

Guard Chen finds Pei near the south gate and begins the permit review.

Panel 7

The permit review becomes a confrontation. Pei's confusion is genuine; Chen's voice hardens.

Panel 8

Yan hears the confrontation from the north well and begins counting the physical timing of violence.

Panel 9

Chen physically escalates, exactly as Yan had calculated.

Panel 10

Guard Chen strikes Pei down but has not yet crossed into killing force.

Panel 11

Yan expects the killing blow. The murder-token anticipates the dodge.

Panel 12

Chen hesitates because the rules do not allow killing force for this violation.

Panel 13

The rule is stated plainly and the setup fails in front of Pei.

Panel 14

At the north well, the murder-weight rejects the proxy attempt and begins to settle into Yan's body.

Panel 15

Yan understands why the dodge failed: proxy killing does not satisfy the murder-token's demand.

Panel 16

Yan remains frozen at the well while time becomes the next threat.

Panel 17

Yan repairs his outward composure and records the failed incident in the transit log.

Panel 18

Yan crosses the courtyard toward Lady Wei's tent, the weight visibly changing him.

Panel 19

Yan knocks. Lady Wei opens the tent herself, already prepared for him.

Panel 20

Inside Lady Wei's tent, Yan states the remaining time and the failed proxy consequence.

Panel 21

Yan explains why every other possible target would push the consequence onto someone he has already tried to protect.

Panel 22

Yan states that Lady Wei designed the contract to bring him here. She refuses to deny it.

Panel 23

Yan accepts that the accusation does not change the required action and prepares to make the choice himself.

Panel 24

Lady Wei reveals no fear. Yan recognizes that she anticipated this possibility too.

Panel 25

Yan commits the direct same-category act himself. The scene stays intimate and brutal without gore.

Panel 26

After Lady Wei dies, the murder-token accepts the act. Yan is left alone with the body and the ledger.

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