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The Sin Ledger of Hollowfoot Pass
Chapter 3
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Panel 2

The caravan reaches the mountain waystation at mid-peak saddle under cold grey light.

Panel 3

The courtyard transitions from movement to controlled rest as guild procedure takes over.

Panel 4

Yan signs the transit log and maintains the appearance of ordinary work.

Panel 5

Yan moves to the courtyard well with a water skin, trying not to look toward the kitchen wagon.

Panel 6

Lady Wei calls Yan's name and appears without her public grief-mask.

Panel 7

Lady Wei positions the conversation in a quiet acoustic pocket near the well.

Panel 8

Lady Wei tells Yan she knows he re-read the sin-memory.

Panel 9

Yan understands she recognizes carrier behavior and does not deny it.

Panel 10

Lady Wei names the part of the memory Yan found: the argument before the murder.

Panel 11

Lady Wei offers a legal escape route.

Panel 12

Yan asks her to explain the legal offer plainly.

Panel 13

Lady Wei names Pei as the target and identifies his connection to her dead husband.

Panel 14

Yan connects Pei to Qiu's extra food and protection.

Panel 15

Yan states the true meaning of Lady Wei's request.

Panel 16

Lady Wei explains why Pei's survival matters to her, without emotional display.

Panel 17

Lady Wei frames the murder as the cleanest solution for Yan's survival.

Panel 18

Yan challenges whether Lady Wei is using his desperation; she does not deny it.

Panel 19

Yan refuses to let her confuse consideration with decision.

Panel 20

Yan looks toward the kitchen wagon and sees Qiu and Pei by the fire.

Panel 21

Pei helps Qiu with the kitchen fire and water, showing the ordinary kindness that makes him impossible to treat as a clean target.

Panel 22

Yan feels the murder-token's strength as useless certainty rather than guidance.

Panel 23

Yan finishes filling the water skin and agrees to Lady Wei's offer.

Panel 24

Lady Wei starts to add conditions, but Yan cuts her off by repeating his agreement.

Panel 25

Yan returns toward the wagons and fully sees Qiu and Pei together, understanding there is no clean answer.

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