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Panel 2

Dawn light filters over the survivor camp. The food truck sits at the perimeter, steam rising from its vents. Lin Shu walks toward the truck carrying a chipped tin cup.

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Lin Shu approaches the truck window. Mo Yan is visible inside, preparing ingredients. She holds out the flowers.

Panel 4

Mo Yan takes the flowers. He examines them closely, turning the cup in his hands. His expression shifts — something unreadable.

Panel 5

Lin Shu reaches for Mo Yan's hand. He flinches and pulls back sharply. The moment freezes.

Panel 6

Lin Shu studies Mo Yan's face. She asks directly about his hands. Mo Yan's expression is guarded.

Panel 7

Mo Yan deflects with a shrug and a dismissive answer. Lin Shu watches him, not believing.

Panel 8

Lin Shu departs, glancing back. Mo Yan watches her go, then looks at the flowers.

Panel 9

Time transition to evening. The survivor camp gathers for the meal. The commander stands at the front of the line.

Panel 10

Mo Yan cooks for the survivors. His movements are precise and practiced. Steam rises from his pots.

Panel 11

Survivors receive their food and leave five-star ratings. The System HUD shows the accumulation.

Panel 12

Mo Yan watches the survivors eat and smile. His internal thought about what they don't know.

Panel 13

Night falls. Mo Yan drives the truck away from the camp toward the opera house. The road is dark.

Panel 14

The truck arrives at the ruined opera house. Candlelight glows from within. Mo Yan prepares to enter.

Panel 15

Inside the opera house. The zombie court is seated at a long table. Madame Qing at the head. The child zombie sits nearest the door.

Panel 16

Mo Yan serves the court. The child zombie watches him from her seat near the door. She's young, perhaps eight.

Panel 17

The child zombie approaches Mo Yan. She looks up at him with those ancient-young eyes and asks her question.

Panel 18

Mo Yan answers. His expression is controlled. The child sees through him.

Panel 19

The child responds. She sees through his lie but acknowledges his food is true.

Panel 20

The meal continues. Five-star ratings float up from the zombie court. The System HUD shows the accumulation.

Panel 21

Mo Yan examines the new tool. The bone saw is clinical, precise, unsettling in its purpose.

Panel 22

Mo Yan drives back to the camp. Dawn is breaking. The wildflowers sit in their tin cup on the truck counter.

Panel 23

The camp comes into view. Survivors are already stirring. Mo Yan's hands rest on the wheel.

Panel 24

Lin Shu spots the truck returning. She's already walking toward it with her bowl. She notices something different.

Panel 25

Final beat. Mo Yan looks at Lin Shu, then at the flowers, then at his hands. The System HUD glows faintly.

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