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Night. The food truck parked in darkness, engine off. Steam rises from the vents. Inside, Mo Yan sits at the counter, hands wrapped around a cup of tea that has gone cold. The HUD flickers to life above the kitchen.

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Close-up on the HUD display, filling most of the page. The mission text is stark and clinical.

Panel 4

Mo Yan's reaction. The System provides more details.

Panel 5

More System details about the bride.

Panel 6

The System provides the groom's perspective.

Panel 7

Mo Yan accepts the mission. The truck begins to drive.

Panel 8

Mo Yan arrives at the opera house transformed.

Panel 9

Inside the kitchen. Mo Yan surveys the space and opens the System pantry.

Panel 10

Mo Yan begins cooking. The wedding feast takes shape.

Panel 11

The wedding cake. Mo Yan works on it.

Panel 12

The ceremony begins. The bride appears.

Panel 13

The groom appears. Mo Yan sees him for the first time.

Panel 14

The vows. Contrast between bride and groom.

Panel 15

Mo Yan serves the first course.

Panel 16

The feast continues. More courses served.

Panel 17

Close-up on the groom eating.

Panel 18

The bride touches the groom's face.

Panel 19

Mo Yan watches from the kitchen doorway.

Panel 20

The wedding cake is served.

Panel 21

The cake is cut. The ratings begin.

Panel 22

The mission completes. Mo Yan receives the notification.

Panel 23

The wedding party continues. Mo Yan slips away.

Panel 24

Mo Yan sits in the truck. The taste of bile.

Panel 25

Final panel. Mo Yan wonders about the truth.

Panel 26

End of chapter. Black panel with final narration.

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