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Night. The food truck on a desolate road. Mo Yan's face illuminated by a glowing System notification.

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The truck drives through the night. The opera house looms larger.

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Mo Yan enters the opera house. The private corridor is different — preserved wallpaper, functioning sconces.

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Mo Yan enters the private quarters. A preserved office from before the apocalypse.

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Close-up on the photograph. Then on the wine rack. Mo Yan sits.

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Madame Qing rises and moves to the wine rack. She selects a bottle.

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The cork comes out. Madame Qing pours. One glass first. Then the second.

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The two glasses sit between them. Madame Qing gestures for him to choose.

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Mo Yan's eyes move between the glasses. His jaw tightens.

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Madame Qing laughs. The sound is elegant, cold, precise.

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Mo Yan drinks. Madame Qing drinks the corked wine without flinching.

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The revelation drops. Madame Qing's crimson eyes lock onto Mo Yan's.

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Mo Yan stands abruptly. His chair scrapes. Madame Qing doesn't move.

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Backstory panel. Madame Qing gestures to the photograph on the wall.

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Madame Qing turns to face Mo Yan. Her expression shifts — something raw beneath the polish.

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Mo Yan processes this. His face goes through several expressions.

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Madame Qing moves closer. The temperature in the room drops.

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The System HUD flickers. New mission prompt appears.

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Mo Yan's face fills the panel. The trembling spreads from his hands to his whole body.

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Madame Qing shakes her head. Her smile returns — patient, explaining something obvious.

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Madame Qing explains the rules. Her fingers tap the desk.

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Madame Qing stands. Moves to the window. The moon behind her makes her a silhouette.

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Mo Yan asks the question. His voice is steady despite everything.

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The threat delivered. Madame Qing's smile doesn't waver.

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Mo Yan processes. He sees both futures laid out before him.

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Mo Yan turns to face Madame Qing. His voice is quiet. Resigned.

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The System confirms. The mission is accepted.

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Madame Qing pours more wine. The ritual continues as if nothing has changed.

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Mo Yan raises his glass. His hand shakes. Wine splashes over the rim.

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Wide shot of the office. The toast complete. The deal sealed.

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Madame Qing's final instruction. A reminder of who holds the power.

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Mo Yan leaves. The door closes. He's alone in the corridor.

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