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The Save Point Has Wheels
Chapter 3
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Panel 2

Wide establishing shot of Greymoor border town. Crowded market square with refugees, merchants, roughspun tents. Dusty ground, late afternoon light. The food truck approaches from a dirt road.

Panel 3

Erine parks the truck at the edge of the market square. Helena watches from inside the cab.

Panel 4

The food truck opens for business. Refugees and merchants begin lining up.

Panel 5

Erine serves while scanning the crowd. Helena notices something off.

Panel 6

A commotion in the market square - raised voices. Erine's head snaps toward it.

Panel 7

Sasha stands over the baron, blackmail letter in hand. Her golden hair catches the light.

Panel 8

Erine's POV - the blackmail scene. Her hands go cold.

Panel 9

Sasha looks up from the baron and her eyes find the food truck.

Panel 10

Sasha's smile - the player's smile. Not the heroine's warmth.

Panel 11

The two reincarnators lock eyes across the crowded market.

Panel 12

Erine's internal realization - both speedrunning, both losing control.

Panel 13

Sasha begins walking toward the food truck through the crowd.

Panel 14

Sasha arrives at the truck window. The confrontation begins.

Panel 15

Sasha examines the truck exterior with open curiosity.

Panel 16

Sasha delivers the 'cute model' line. Erine doesn't respond.

Panel 17

Erine's silence. The tension stretches.

Panel 18

Helena notices Erine's hands shaking. The weight of what she's seeing.

Panel 19

Sasha examines Helena with interest. The pieces connecting.

Panel 20

Helena's guarded response. The tension between the three women.

Panel 21

Sasha's knowing look. The knife-fight begins metaphorically.

Panel 22

Sasha turns to leave, but delivers one more line. A warning.

Panel 23

Sasha walks away into the crowd. Erine and Helena watch her go.

Panel 24

Erine's hands are still shaking. Helena waits for answers.

Panel 25

End beat - Erine closes the truck window. The game has changed.

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