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The Oathmaker's Apprentice
Chapter 5
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Panel 2

Promotion courtyard after the public oath-rite; golden script still fades in the air, and the crowd is stunned into silence.

Panel 3

Yan follows Mu toward the First Seat hall while allies and witnesses hesitate behind him.

Panel 4

The First Seat hall appears: celestial, silent, and polished like a mirror over the sky.

Panel 5

Mu states the offer: overwriting Yan's inherited exile-oath. Elder Luo is revealed listening behind a screen.

Panel 6

Yan demands exact boundaries for the offer before responding.

Panel 7

Lin and Shen have followed close enough to hear the price; their reactions make the danger plain.

Panel 8

Yan weighs freedom against losing his only reliable weapon.

Panel 9

Yan accepts, but forces the offer into plain oath terms before surrendering the inkstick.

Panel 10

The ink accepts the trade and awakens under Mu's hand.

Panel 11

Mu performs the overwrite rite, targeting the mountain-binding cord at Yan's wrist.

Panel 12

The release settles; Yan, Lin, Shen, and Elder Luo react to the impossible sight.

Panel 13

Mu keeps the inkstick and gives Yan formal permission to depart.

Panel 14

Yan leaves the First Seat hall, passing witnesses who understand the trade but not its full cost.

Panel 15

Yan descends the long sect road toward the main gate, with Lin accompanying him partway.

Panel 16

As Yan nears the gate, he remembers what leaving used to mean under the inherited oath.

Panel 17

Yan reaches Mirror Pool Sect's front gate and the boundary line that once meant death.

Panel 18

Yan crosses the boundary and survives, experiencing freedom for the first time.

Panel 19

Madam Xue appears outside the gate with the Black Tally Sect's ledger open.

Panel 20

Madam Xue reminds Yan that freedom from Mirror Pool does not cancel his guarantor oath.

Panel 21

Yan says the ancient loan was already paid in the forgotten coin; Madam Xue asks the key question.

Panel 22

Yan remembers the hidden clause and finally understands that the forgotten coin had a body: his grandfather's.

Panel 23

Madam Xue makes the threat clear: Black Tally Sect can now come for Yan as inheritor of the body-payment.

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