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The Lifespan Pawnshop
Chapter 2
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The next night on the seventh floor: moonlit jade counters, immortal clerks above, mortal courier lanes below, and Lu Yan returning to work after the green-hooded deposit.

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Lu Yan hides her forbidden stitched ledger inside her courier satchel before the shift fully begins.

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Another mortal courier notices Lu Yan guarding her satchel and warns her not to attract attention.

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Lu Yan performs the official verification procedure, showing how her taste gift fits into pawnshop work.

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A sect elder’s century-old deposit tastes wrong: too young, medicinal, and not his.

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Lu Yan signs the official receipt while secretly encoding the stolen disciple-years into her ledger.

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A fellow courier nearly catches Lu Yan writing and warns her again.

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A veiled noble presents a ten-year pledge sealed in a cinnabar orb.

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The noble’s single pledge tastes like three siblings blended together under one seal.

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Lu Yan records the blended sibling taste without being able to accuse the noble.

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A wandering swordsman arrives with a narrow crystal vial of lifespan collateral.

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The swordsman’s collateral contains the death-flash of mountain rain, implying the years came from someone who died violently.

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Lu Yan must complete the transaction even though the taste suggests murder.

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Lu Yan develops her own coded language because she cannot read the official cultivation script.

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The floor grows busier, making Lu Yan’s secret work more dangerous.

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The other couriers remind Lu Yan that Lu Miao’s treatment depends on her clean work record.

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A new, unrelated customer’s deposit carries a faint note of Lu Yan’s mother’s bloodline.

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The faint maternal note evokes Lu Suwen’s remembered taste, but only as a fragment.

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Lu Yan secretly records the maternal fragment but refuses to jump to conclusions without a pattern.

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A second unrelated transaction carries the same maternal note, making coincidence impossible.

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Lu Yan understands that her mother’s lifespan may have been divided and laundered through multiple accounts.

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As the shift thins out, Lu Yan finds a talisman-lit corner to expand the ledger map.

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Lu Yan draws a rough map of counters, routes, robe colors, and bloodline fragments.

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Lu Yan circles the green hood’s route in shaking ink, understanding that her mother’s stolen years are part of a larger chain.

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