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The Borrowed Heart of Yi Wen
Chapter 2
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Panel 2

Moonlit Ning family tea chamber prepared for a formal rite: jade cushions, lotus steam, polished low tables, and bone-lantern shadows. Yi Wen enters as the assigned tea preparer.

Panel 3

Ning Jiu presides casually before the rite begins, charming the room and barely acknowledging Yi Wen.

Panel 4

Ning Que enters and takes her place opposite Ning Jiu, looking innocent and untouchable.

Panel 5

Yi Wen prepares the tea tools while hiding both the original poison packet and his revised formula tablet.

Panel 6

Before the rite begins, Yi Wen interrupts the flow by kneeling to present the revised tablet to Ning Que.

Panel 7

Yi Wen explains the revised formula as a safer improvement, making the test sound humble and useful.

Panel 8

Ning Que reads the tablet. Nothing in her expression changes, making the silence dangerous.

Panel 9

Ning Que gently questions Yi Wen, forcing him to confirm that he changed the medicine she gave him.

Panel 10

Ning Que begins the recall-pulse. The first breath is cold pressure at Yi Wen's sternum.

Panel 11

The recall-pulse advances into its second breath, revealing the contract's plain consequence.

Panel 12

Yi Wen chooses performed submission before the third breath becomes full pain.

Panel 13

Ning Que aborts the recall-pulse before it becomes lethal. The room still reads the exchange as ordinary discipline.

Panel 14

Ning Que replaces the revised tablet with the original packet in a movement hidden by etiquette.

Panel 15

Yi Wen rises and resumes the tea rite, now carrying the original killing poison.

Panel 16

The formal tea sequence begins, each step making the poison harder to stop.

Panel 17

Yi Wen serves the poisoned cup to Ning Jiu, who continues joking with Ning Que.

Panel 18

The cup pauses at Ning Jiu's lips. Yi Wen has one last impossible second, while Ning Que watches him instead of the cup.

Panel 19

Ning Jiu drinks the poisoned tea.

Panel 20

The poison begins to imitate a cultivation breakthrough accident inside Ning Jiu's body.

Panel 21

Ning Jiu's qi surges violently, making his death appear like a failed breakthrough.

Panel 22

Ning Jiu's loyalists rush forward, their grief immediate and visible. Ning Que performs shock first.

Panel 23

Attempts to save Ning Jiu fail as the poison's disguise completes itself.

Panel 24

The chapter closes on Yi Wen's survival and guilt while Ning Que's public grief covers the murder.

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