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The Borrowed Heart of Yi Wen
Chapter 1
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Panel 2

Moonlit outer-court corridor of the Bone Stitch Sect, lined with ivory bone lanterns and drifting jade mist. Yi Wen walks alone toward a private summons.

Panel 3

Yi Wen passes through guarded halls where his status is understood without being spoken kindly.

Panel 4

The entrance to Ning Que's private medicinal courtyard glows with jade wards and lotus mist.

Panel 5

Ning Que's pavilion appears beautiful and empty, with warm tea already set for two.

Panel 6

Ning Que appears from behind a silk screen, graceful and composed.

Panel 7

Ning Que pours tea without issuing a command, and Yi Wen gauges the lack of immediate contract pressure.

Panel 8

Ning Que begins with concern rather than threat.

Panel 9

Ning Que introduces the claim that her cousin has been poisoning her through family tea rites.

Panel 10

Yi Wen asks permission to examine the evidence and Ning Que explains the supposed harm.

Panel 11

Yi Wen understands why an open accusation would be dangerous, and Ning Que frames secrecy as necessity.

Panel 12

Ning Que names the qualities that make Yi Wen useful: skilled, factionless, and vulnerable.

Panel 13

Ning Que gives Yi Wen the formula and frames it as a counter-poison.

Panel 14

Yi Wen feels no recall-pulse and calculates the survival value of obedience.

Panel 15

Yi Wen accepts the task with practiced humility while Ning Que watches for cracks.

Panel 16

Yi Wen asks to confirm the formula under the cover of professional caution.

Panel 17

Yi Wen enters the attached alchemy space and puts on his work apron.

Panel 18

Yi Wen begins a standard alchemical test for counter-poisons.

Panel 19

Yi Wen runs a second test to make sure he is not mistaken.

Panel 20

Yi Wen identifies the formula as a killing poison and understands how it would hide the evidence.

Panel 21

Yi Wen realizes the death would look like a cultivation accident rather than murder.

Panel 22

Yi Wen presses a hand to his chest and understands the hidden order inside the favor.

Panel 23

Ning Que interrupts from the main pavilion, testing whether Yi Wen has discovered the truth.

Panel 24

Yi Wen conceals his realization and gives Ning Que the answer she wants.

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