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Day 5. Ryan's truck interior. Pre-dawn gray light seeps through the reinforced window. Ryan stands at the counter, hands moving mechanically over a tray of freshly harvested crystals.

Panel 3

Ryan continues his routine. The truck is quiet. Outside, the first undead of the evening begin to gather at the perimeter.

Panel 4

The door chime sounds. Something is different about this sound — or maybe Ryan is imagining it.

Panel 5

Ryan turns to face the window. What he sees there breaks something in him.

Panel 6

The reveal. Mira at the window, six A-grade crystals on the counter.

Panel 7

Close-ups on the crystals. Six A-grades. Ryan understands what they mean.

Panel 8

Mira's eye. Ryan can't look away from it.

Panel 9

Mira points at the menu. The System registers her grade.

Panel 10

Ryan's hands on the counter. Trembling. He sees the crystals. He sees the menu. He sees what happens next.

Panel 11

The trap crystallizes. Ryan sees both paths.

Panel 12

The System display. The quota. The clock.

Panel 13

Ryan's hand reaches toward the six crystals. He can't help it.

Panel 14

Flashback fragment. Ryan remembers the funeral.

Panel 15

Mira hasn't moved. She waits.

Panel 16

Ryan's internal debate. He talks to himself.

Panel 17

Ryan's eyes meet Mira's eye. The wordless conversation.

Panel 18

Ryan's hands move toward the knife. Then away. Then toward the ingredients.

Panel 19

Ryan starts cooking. The decision is made. The knife comes out.

Panel 20

The plate goes on the counter. Steam rises. Mira's reaction.

Panel 21

Mira eats. The System registers the restoration.

Panel 22

Ryan watches Mira finish the plate. Her eye never leaves him.

Panel 23

The suited corpse appears at the window. He's noticed what Ryan did.

Panel 24

Ryan looks at the suited corpse. Then at Mira. The weight of it.

Panel 25

End of day five. The queue grows. Ryan stands between two impossible choices.

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