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Chapter 2
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Day 2 dawn over District 7. The truck sits in the shadow of a collapsed finance tower. Ryan looks out at the growing queue.

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Ryan starts cooking. The morning prep. Knives out, ingredients checked. The System menu scrolls new options.

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First customers of Day 2 arrive. More shamblers than yesterday. Ryan serves them through the reinforced window.

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Ryan notices something wrong. The shamblers are waiting in line properly now. Not pushing. Not crowding.

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Ryan locks the side door. Checks the window latch. The shamblers outside don't move, but one of them watches the door handle.

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Day 3. New arrivals at dusk. Runners. Faster, more intact, crouching at the truck's perimeter.

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Runners watching the shamblers feed. Calculating. One of them has a broken piece of rebar in its hand.

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Ryan cooking under pressure. Runners pressing closer to the window. He serves them first to keep them calm.

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Night of Day 3. A new customer at the window. Suited corpse. Most of its face intact. It holds something in its palm.

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Ryan examines the A-grade crystal. The System confirms it. He starts a new stack.

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Day 4. Ryan's crystal collection laid out. D through A. Four days left. He looks at the A-grade and thinks of something.

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Daytime. Survivors at the District 7 perimeter. Watching Ryan's truck. Suspicious, dependent, afraid.

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Ryan dozing at the counter during a lull. He dreams. His sister's funeral — no body, just an empty grave.

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Night of Day 4. The suited corpse returns. More coherent. It stands at the window, gesturing at the menu.

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The suited corpse gestures desperately. Pointing at the menu, then at itself, then at the direction it came from. A loved one. Someone it's going back to.

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Ryan serving the suited corpse. It takes the food, drops another A-grade crystal, and leaves — heading north.

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Ryan alone in the truck. Looking at the A-grade crystals. Thinking.

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The System display updates. Ryan reads the definition of S-grade. It crystallizes for him.

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Ryan sits in the dark truck. The suited corpse is gone. The shamblers have thinned. He stares at the A-grade crystals.

Panel 21

Chapter 2 closing shot. The truck in District 7 at night, a small island of light. The horizon is dark with distant movement.

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