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Destiny's Destiny

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Four hundred years ago General Raizen sealed the demon lord Veyron inside a rib of lightning. Today that seal is cracking, and the key to it is Zach — a Pentagon screw-up who already put a bullet in the man now wearing Veyron's curse, Timothy Jr. To stop a slaughter that grows by one city a day, Zach has to assemble seven people crazy enough to walk into a demon's cathedral, and then decide whether the lock was ever meant to be a person.

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“Destinys Destiny Chapter 1 The Pilot- (1). 450 Years Ago There was a war between kingdoms and humanity. One strong kingdom used a forbidden power to gain an advantage for his kingdom. However, his plans backfired. Dimensional realms began to rip open as the war shifted toward the realm invaders. Three portals opened simultaneously, all around the lands. The demon realm opened first, the god and goddess realm opened next, and lastly, the elf realm. Soon, the battlefield turned into pure chaos. The kingdom that started that using that power and everyone around felt a dark, sinister slowly getting stronger on the battlefield as the Demons race started coming out of the portal, terrorizing everyone, killing guards and innocent people, joining the fight for their side. Then the gods and goddesses came to try to stop the demons. Elves came out afterward, joining the battle and taking resources from the land. There was one elf who was old and wise as the realms started clashing. The Demon King and the strongest demons came out, along with the gods and goddesses. The humans started fighting for their lives against the demons. The gods and goddesses showed up to try to stop the demons. Absolutely — I’ll keep the exact storyline and events, only fixing grammar, punctuation, and wording so it reads more naturally. Leading to the first ever big war involving multiple races from different realms. Years go by as all races have wars between the lands. (2). 400 Years Later The Demon race and the gods and goddesses were at war, as the humans helped the gods after an agreement made years ago, sending their first-ever General, General Raizen—one of the strongest humans ever and the best General they had. God of Earth, Yaldabaoth, and Goddess of Love, Satrisha Vale, and the Demon they were all against was Veyron, the Reaper of Souls. They all stare at each other before Raizen rushes in, but trips on an incline, falling face-first. Yaldabaoth: What a fool you are, Raizen. Satrisha: Are you okay? (Goes to help Raizen.) Veyron: I shall break you and make you bleed for some fun. Yaldabaoth: Earth Shatter Strike! As he throws the attack at Veyron, Veyron dodges at the last second, as his demon eyes see the attack and allow him to dodge it just in time. Veyron: To show you, imbecile. (3) Yep — same as the last page: grammar and punctuation only, with the storyline unchanged. Raizen: Thunderbolt Ball Shot! As a ball of thunder is thrown at Veyron, Veyron dodges the attack. Raizen: Thunder Expansion! As the thunderball turns into a thunderbolt, he launches it back at Veyron from behind. As it flies at Veyron, Veyron sees it. Veyron: Curse Creation: Demonic Arm! As a big arm appears, grabbing the thunderbolt and throwing it back at them. Satrisha: My turn. Divine Judgement! As vines stop the thunderbolt and trap Veyron in the vines. Satrisha: Got you. The vines snap as he walks toward her. Veyron chuckles. (4) Veyron closes in on Satrisha, bringing her to the ground as he attempts to stomp on her head. General Raizen and Yaldabaoth try to stop him, but Veyron grabs both of them and throws them to the ground, slowly placing his foot on Satrisha’s head. Veyron: Is this all?! Veyron throws Yaldabaoth and Raizen as well as kicking Satrisha, sending her sliding back. Yaldabaoth lands on his feet as Raizen hits a mountain hard. Yaldabaoth is the only one currently standing, as Satrisha has been knocked out. Yaldabaoth: Fisher Slam! As cracks break through the ground from his foot, Veyron doesn’t say a word as a giant spear pierces Yaldabaoth. Veyron hears him breathing as he slowly walks over and snaps his neck toward Raizen at a 180° angle. As he gets up, Veyron throws his head at Raizen. Raizen catches it in shock. Lightning starts appearing on Raizen. As lightning courses through his veins… (5) Raizen: You’ll pay for that! Veyron: One by one, just like your buddy, you’ll die. Raizen rushes Veyron, hitting his face from left to right for a couple of seconds before Veyron throws him to the ground. Raizen gets back up as they both go back and forth, punching each other for a while. Veyron kicks Raizen back. Veyron: This ends now! Raizen: You’re right about one thing, and that’s the end is now. BOTH: Veyron: Demonic Purge! Raizen: Lightning Bolt Barrage! As both moves collide, injuring both men, there is a lightning barrier protecting Satrisha and also trapping Veyron’s injured body around his lightning. Raizen picks himself up and slowly walks toward Veyron. Veyron: (Coughing) You couldn’t finish me, so you can save her. No power left to finish me. Raizen: You’re right. I don’t, but I can seal you instead. (6) Veyron: What? No, you can’t! Raizen: Thunder Rib Seal! Veyron: No! Demonic Curse Rebirth! As Raizen seals Veyron away, saving the lands from the demons as they get banned and sealed away from every realm. Raizen passes out after the fight from exhaustion. Satrisha wakes up and calls for help. After getting help, Satrisha waits at the hospital with Raizen. 3 Days Later Satrisha and Raizen go to Yalda’s funeral. Satrisha: Glad it’s finally over. Raizen: To be honest, I think… Satrisha: What? Raizen: I think I’m hungry. Satrisha: Right now is not the time, Raizen! Raizen: I’m here to honor him, too. I’ll miss him. See you soon, old friend, Yaldal. Satrisha: I feel like something went wrong with the seal. Satrisha: Oh, is that so? We stopped him once. We could do it again. Raizen: Yeah. (7.) 50 years later. [Present time] Zach (narrator): In Boulder, Colorado, 25 miles north from Denver, around 50 years near the Rocky Mountains, there was a major fight changing the world and altering the world forever. [Zach’s apartment] Zach wakes up to his alarm at 6:05 AM. As Zach gets up, stretching and getting ready for work, he turns his TV on but is cooking eggs, not paying attention to the news. As Zach finishes making his food, he feels a vibration in his pocket. It’s his work phone. Zach picks up the phone. Zach: Good morning, Sir. Jeff: Get your ass in my office ASAP! Zach: Yes, sir. [Zach hangs up] Zach (in thought): What’s up his ass this morning? As Zach walks out of his apartment, forgetting to turn off his TV. [Zoom in on the news on TV] (8) (Female News Reporter): I’m in downtown Boulder, where there seems to be a man destroying the town indiscriminately, killing people. [As she turns around, she sees Timothy Jr. walking toward her.] News Reporter: MY GOD! [Starts screaming] AHHHHHH! [When Timothy gets to her, he snaps her neck 180 degrees.] TJ: Cameraman, don’t stop recording or you’re dead! [As he picks up a gun from a police officer he killed, pointing it at the cameraman.] Cameraman: Okay! [Panics and gets scared.] [As TJ fully rips her off, pointing her at the camera.] TJ: As you see here, today marks a new day. I shall bring real peace and prosperity. My name is Timothy Jr., aka The Harbinger of Death. [The scene cuts after TJ kills the cameraman.] [Quick cut to Zach at a drive-thru coffee shop and driving to work.] (9) Zach walks into the Pentagon. Going through security, walking past the group watching the news, Zach walks into Jeff’s office and Zach sees Kità. Zach: Please don’t tell me this is about Kità? What are we gonna do now? Jeff: No, it’s more important than that. Did you see the news this morning? Surely you— Zach: Nope. (Straight face.) Kità: You can’t be serious right now. Zach: Says the one that hasn’t been here for months. Plus, I don’t watch the news. Kità: It’s TJ. Zach: I can’t be?! But how? (Shocked.) Jeff: To sum it up, TJ caused millions of damage and tens of thousands of casualties in downtown. Zach: So, what’s the plan? Jeff: I need you to make a team and hunt TJ down. Kità: I’ll be joining your team. Jeff: You need 7 in total. You’ve got two so far, so do you have any idea who you want? [Kità looks at Zach.]”

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The First Herald
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What I Did Three Years Ago
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The Elf Gate
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Breach
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Alone
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What Kità Saw
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The Harbinger's City
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Unsealing
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Destiny's Destiny
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