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Zean: The Last Stand
Chapter 3
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Panel 2

CUT TO: Dark foggy ruins. Zean's silhouette walks away from the base, shoulders slightly slumped but head held high. He disappears into the mist without looking back.

Panel 3

CUT TO: Interior of field shelter. Team members stand in stunned silence. Door still open behind them, cold air creeping in. Brandon clutches his bloody nose.

Panel 4

Mark clears his throat. He steps forward slightly, breaking the silence. His expression is troubled.

Panel 5

Mark continues, his voice growing heavier. The other members begin to understand what he means.

Panel 6

Mark keeps listing. Each point lands like a hammer blow. The team members' faces grow more troubled.

Panel 7

Mark's voice trails off. The implications are too heavy. Chloe's face goes ghost-white.

Panel 8

Chloe speaks, her voice cracking. She turns to Brandon with pure hatred.

Panel 9

Chloe rounds on Brandon. Her voice rises. Brandon tries to defend himself.

Panel 10

A fourth team member steps between them. Tension escalating.

Panel 11

Chloe's voice rises to a shout. Her hands are shaking. This is her breaking point.

Panel 12

Brandon wipes blood from his chin. His expression shifts to defensive anger.

Panel 13

Mark shakes his head. He speaks up — this time with conviction.

Panel 14

Mark continues. The team members are listening now — really listening.

Panel 15

Another team member speaks up. Then another. Each confession adds weight.

Panel 16

Chloe sinks onto a crate. The fight drains out of her. Sobbing.

Panel 17

Brandon slumps against the wall. Silent now. The reality setting in.

Panel 18

Wide shot. The team is scattered, broken. No one is talking. The damage is done.

Panel 19

Zean's arm twitches. A small movement. His eyes snap open.

Panel 20

Zean looks at his arm. The bite wound — it's changing. Black veins spreading but not like zombie decay.

Panel 21

Zean's body convulses. Not in pain — in pressure. Something fighting inside.

Panel 22

Zean struggles to stand. His body is changing — but not dying. Rising.

Panel 23

Back to base. Chloe still sobbing. Team silent. The weight of their choice crushing them.

Panel 24

Final shot — split perspective. Zean standing in ruins, transformed. Then the team in the shelter, broken. The contrast.

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