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Night in the candidate dormitory after Ling-er has risen to rank six; candles burn low, silk curtains and examination papers surround her.

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The dormitory door opens to official pressure; a palace guard delivers a summons.

Panel 4

Ling-er is escorted through the candidates' corridor as rumors spread before breakfast.

Panel 5

The escorted walk becomes more oppressive as Ling-er nears the Crown Prince's wing.

Panel 6

Outside the review chamber, Ling-er rehearses safe phrases and fails to calm herself.

Panel 7

Ling-er enters Li Hui's private literary review chamber, an elegant room of books, screens, and annotated poems.

Panel 8

Li Hui gives Ling-er a poem to judge and frames the review as a test of literary honesty.

Panel 9

Direct imperial attention triggers Ling-er's stutter and humiliation.

Panel 10

Ling-er asks for a brush instead of giving empty praise.

Panel 11

Ling-er marks the first and second stolen passages on Li Hui's poem.

Panel 12

Ling-er explains the first plagiarized couplet in plain terms while trying not to panic.

Panel 13

Ling-er identifies the second stolen line and explains why it weakens the poem.

Panel 14

Ling-er says the dangerous honest judgment: borrowed grief makes weak poetry.

Panel 15

Ling-er realizes she has openly contradicted the Crown Prince and expects punishment.

Panel 16

Li Hui responds in writing, not with punishment, and Ling-er cannot read his intent.

Panel 17

Li Hui gives Ling-er the written thanks and quietly values her honest mind.

Panel 18

Ling-er leaves the review, shaken by the fact that honesty was rewarded instead of punished.

Panel 19

Back in her room, Ling-er completes the required nightly review margin and records her private regret.

Panel 20

Ling-er submits the reflection slip to the Bureau collection box, believing the matter is finished.

Panel 21

Back in her room, Ling-er finds her reflection slip returned with the Crown Prince's correction written beneath her private margin note.

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