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The Sin Ledger of Hollowfoot Pass
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Panel 2

Cold morning at the Hollowfoot Pass inspection gate, black granite arch and caravan queue in fog.

Panel 3

Yan waits in the stopped inspection line just before the collapse is fully understood.

Panel 4

The line reacts to Bak's quiet collapse and the visible black scars.

Panel 5

Yan reads the collapse as a ledger problem rather than a shock.

Panel 6

Master Dou emerges from the inspection booth and selects Yan to certify the death.

Panel 7

Yan steps over Bak's broken ledger and prepares the death certification.

Panel 8

Yan identifies how Bak was trapped by a resealed token.

Panel 9

Yan writes the official cause while withholding the implied accusation.

Panel 10

Master Dou reviews Yan's certification and adds an annotation.

Panel 11

The inspection line resumes around Bak's corpse.

Panel 12

Yan prepares for his own inspection, but Master Dou stops him.

Panel 13

Lady Wei appears from the inspection booth side door.

Panel 14

Master Dou introduces Lady Wei's sealed contract and assigns Yan as courier.

Panel 15

Master Dou invokes Article Four, making refusal dangerous.

Panel 16

Yan chooses compliance and prepares his chest for the token.

Panel 17

Lady Wei reveals the sin-token.

Panel 18

Lady Wei presses the token to Yan's sternum and activates it.

Panel 19

The murder-memory enters Yan as facts rather than a conventional vision.

Panel 20

Yan learns the dead man's name and connects it to old caravan records.

Panel 21

The token reveals its recipient as Master Dou.

Panel 22

The murder-token settles into Yan and changes his physical state.

Panel 23

Master Dou clears Yan for the pass while Yan contains what he learned.

Panel 24

Yan faces Hollowfoot Pass with Bak's body behind him and the active murder-token inside him.

Panel 25

Yan enters Hollowfoot Pass alone with the active token.

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