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The Last Morsel
Chapter 15
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Panel 2

Chaos of battle. The sky torn open with light from the Correction Team. Below, allies fighting, The Last Morsel blazing with golden light on its roof.

Panel 3

Transition effect - Alex's consciousness pulling into the digital space of the System.

Panel 4

Alex arrives in the System's core - a vast digital cathedral of light and code.

Panel 5

The System begins to reveal its history - the truth about the Shimmer.

Panel 6

The System explains the elimination protocols - why Alex was supposed to be deleted.

Panel 7

A memory fragment reveals someone deliberately gave Alex the backdoor.

Panel 8

System notifications confirming Alex's unauthorized access.

Panel 9

Alex speaks to the System directly, proposing his modification.

Panel 10

The System responds with 'PROCEED' - Alex begins his proposal.

Panel 11

Alex presents his first proposal - making Culinary Artisan official.

Panel 12

Alex presents his second proposal - giving the Classless a path forward.

Panel 13

The System processes Alex's proposals, showing the impact assessment.

Panel 14

The Executive Administrator appears - warmer than the Compliance Division.

Panel 15

The approval notifications cascade - Culinary Artisan officially recognized.

Panel 16

More approvals - Classless reclassified and Cook Assistant approved.

Panel 17

Alex returns to reality - the battle's turning point.

Panel 18

The battle ends - survivors react with disbelief and joy.

Panel 19

Raiki and Harry reach Alex on the roof - concern and relief.

Panel 20

Alex explains what happened - the changes ripple across the world.

Panel 21

Mira arrives with news - the Classless across the region are receiving their new status.

Panel 22

The scope of the change shown - System windows across the battlefield showing new status.

Panel 23

Final page - the weight of what Alex has done settles in. A new era begins.

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