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The Forger's Mouth
Chapter 5
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Panel 2

Rainy night outside Three-Stamp Atelier after the certification hearing. The shop is closed, but Wen Jia remains inside under a single oil lamp.

Panel 3

Inside the atelier, Wen Jia locks the room and quietly prepares for the visitor she expects.

Panel 4

Bai Lou enters the closed atelier alone, bypassing the lock with unnerving ease.

Panel 5

Bai Lou makes it clear he has come without attendants, making the visit more intimate and more dangerous.

Panel 6

The old receipt is revealed as proof of the bribe that ruined Wen Jia three years ago.

Panel 7

Wen Jia refuses to show fear; Bai Lou says he did not come for immediate revenge.

Panel 8

Bai Lou frames his demand as protection for Bai Yan now that the court record has made her survival public.

Panel 9

Bai Lou presents the binding proposal: protection and return of the receipt in exchange for Wen Jia's exclusive service to Lotus Pier.

Panel 10

Wen Jia names the trap inside the offer. Bai Lou insists on calling it shelter.

Panel 11

Bai Lou presses the emotional shape of the bargain while Wen Jia refuses to let him rename confinement.

Panel 12

Wen Jia explains the professional consequences in plain terms: the contract would turn her license into Bai Lou's instrument.

Panel 13

Bai Lou gives the final shape of the bargain and tries to make it sound inevitable.

Panel 14

Wen Jia stops negotiating politely and speaks from three years of controlled rage.

Panel 15

Wen Jia reveals that her survival after the punishment became preparation, not submission.

Panel 16

Wen Jia opens the false bottom of the ink tray while Bai Lou realizes this part of the room was prepared for him.

Panel 17

Instead of being enraged, Bai Lou is pleased by Wen Jia's preparation, revealing the obsessive shape of his interest.

Panel 18

Bai Lou reaches toward the table; Wen Jia raises the ink-stone to stop him.

Panel 19

The confrontation settles into a private standoff. Bai Lou treats her threat as intimacy; Wen Jia refuses the frame.

Panel 20

Before either can move, the rain-dark window interrupts the private bargain.

Panel 21

Bai Yan appears at the window armed, turning the two-person blackmail into a three-person standoff.

Panel 22

Bai Yan makes clear she came by choice, not as anyone's rescued property. Bai Lou remains disturbingly calm.

Panel 23

The pilot closes on the frozen three-way standoff: receipt against receipt, pistol against contract, thumb against seal paste.

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