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The Bride Who Married Her Own Killer
Chapter 4
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Panel 2

Morning of day forty inside the jade-lit Mu marriage-cave; the formal treaty inspection is about to begin.

Panel 3

Ruoshuang hears the inspection announcement and tries to steady herself before Mu Yan joins her.

Panel 4

Mu Yan explains the inspection in plain terms, making the stakes clear for Ruoshuang and the reader.

Panel 5

Mu Hai enters the marriage-cave for the formal inspection.

Panel 6

Mu Hai greets Ruoshuang with politeness that feels like a blade hidden in a sleeve.

Panel 7

Yuelan senses danger and retreats inside Ruoshuang's mind before the test begins.

Panel 8

The pulse test begins, establishing the visible rule and consequence of the inspection.

Panel 9

Mu Hai probes Ruoshuang's meridians while Yuelan tries to hide her presence.

Panel 10

Mu Hai tests Ruoshuang verbally while reading her qi response.

Panel 11

Mu Hai remembers the feel of Yuelan's Heart-Sword qi from the battlefield without explaining the full past.

Panel 12

Mu Hai nearly names what he has found, while Ruoshuang and Yuelan freeze.

Panel 13

Mu Hai publicly declares the Twin-Cultivation cycle stable, preserving the appearance of peace.

Panel 14

Mu Yan reacts with relief, but Mu Hai's hidden knowledge hangs over Ruoshuang.

Panel 15

Mu Hai engineers a moment to speak with Ruoshuang away from Mu Yan.

Panel 16

Ruoshuang follows Mu Hai into the corridor outside the main cave chamber.

Panel 17

Mu Hai reveals that he recognized Yuelan's presence in Ruoshuang's qi.

Panel 18

Mu Hai offers his bargain: seven days of silence in exchange for an answer.

Panel 19

Mu Hai asks the question Ruoshuang cannot answer: why Yuelan has not killed Mu Yan.

Panel 20

Ruoshuang turns inward to ask Yuelan, but Yuelan refuses to answer.

Panel 21

Ruoshuang has no answer, and Mu Hai sets the seven-day deadline.

Panel 22

Ruoshuang returns to Mu Yan with the secret still hidden and a new deadline in place.

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