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Pei Zhaoyue Does Not Kneel
Chapter 11
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Panel 2

The capital in smoke. The palace district burns in the distance. Ink-wash panels of chaos — soldiers running, doors being barricaded.

Panel 3

The purge begins in earnest — arrest warrants, soldiers at doors.

Panel 4

The Crown Prince's son's residence — doors closing, soldiers closing in.

Panel 5

The Crown Prince's son being dragged from his chambers.

Panel 6

Zhaoxia in the Crown Prince's palace, given the news.

Panel 7

Zhaoxia changes into mourning robes — a quiet, private moment.

Panel 8

Zhaoxia is escorted to a carriage. The journey home begins.

Panel 9

The road out of the capital. Zhaoxia's silent journey.

Panel 10

The Pei estate comes into view. The gate is ahead.

Panel 11

Zhaoxia steps out of the carriage. She stands at the gate.

Panel 12

Zhaoyue appears at the gate to receive her sister.

Panel 13

Close-up on Zhaoxia's face — the coldness is visible.

Panel 14

Zhaoxia speaks for the first time — a statement, not a question.

Panel 15

Zhaoyue does not deny it. The sisters stand in silence.

Panel 16

Zhaoxia presses further — she is beginning to understand.

Panel 17

Zhaoxia continues — she is working through the pieces.

Panel 18

Zhaoxia's realization crystallizes.

Panel 19

Zhaoyue's response — quiet, factual, unflinching.

Panel 20

Zhaoxia's response — she is not crying. She is done crying.

Panel 21

Zhaoyue answers — the truth, without apology.

Panel 22

Zhaoxia's question — the one she has been holding.

Panel 23

Zhaoyue's answer — complicated, honest, and cold.

Panel 24

Zhaoxia's reaction — she does not accept this easily.

Panel 25

Zhaoyue's final answer — the chapter's closing statement.

Panel 26

Zhaoxia's final look — she turns and walks into the estate.

Panel 27

Zhaoyue alone at the gate. The chapter's final beat.

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