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Pei Zhaoyue Does Not Kneel
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A long cold corridor in the Pei estate. Stone floors, bare walls, winter light filtering through high windows. At the far end, a doorway glows with candlelight.

Panel 3

Zhaoyue stands in the doorway of her grandfather's study, watching the scene inside.

Panel 4

Close-up on the grandfather at his desk, brush poised over the document.

Panel 5

Pei Grandmother speaks, her counsel being ignored.

Panel 6

Pei Grandfather dismisses his wife with a sneer.

Panel 7

Grandfather signs the document with a flourish.

Panel 8

The scene in the study ends. Grandmother and Zhaoyue's reactions.

Panel 9

Time skip. The estate in autumn, showing the first signs of decline.

Panel 10

The fall of the Pei house. Imperial messengers arrive.

Panel 11

Zhaoyue's father retreats into wine.

Panel 12

The newborn brother is taken away to maternal kin.

Panel 13

Zhaoxia is taken to the Shen household. The sisters part.

Panel 14

Zhaoyue watches from the cold wing. Her expression begins to calcify.

Panel 15

The estate in winter. Halls going dark. More servants leaving.

Panel 16

Zhaoyue walks the empty estate. She finds her grandmother.

Panel 17

Zhaoyue looks at her grandmother. The grandmother is not weeping. She is studying the map.

Panel 18

Zhaoyue enters her grandmother's room. The old woman looks up.

Panel 19

The grandmother speaks. 'Sit.'

Panel 20

Zhaoyue sits. The grandmother begins to teach.

Panel 21

The grandmother continues. The first lesson begins.

Panel 22

Night falls. The lesson continues by candlelight.

Panel 23

Montage suggestion. Seasons pass. The lessons continue.

Panel 24

Montage continues. Zhaoyue grows. The grandmother teaches.

Panel 25

Final page. Zhaoyue at seventeen, standing before a wall of maps. The ten years are complete.

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