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Overtime Fairy: Ledger of Two Worlds
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Late-night office. Rain streaks the windows. Most desks are empty, monitors dark. Ruer's cubicle is the only island of light.

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Ruer's cubicle. Team Lead Kang stands beside her desk, polished and impatient.

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Time passes. The office is empty except for Ruer. Rain taps harder.

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Ruer grabs her bag and runs through the darkened office.

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Outside. Heavy rain. Ruer hurries toward the bus stop with a transparent umbrella.

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Ruer stands alone at the bus stop. Rain drums on the shelter roof.

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Ruer checks a taxi app, then lowers her phone.

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Headlights cut through the rain. A bus approaches.

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The bus pulls to the curb. In one breath, the ordinary bus and a river-dragon overlap.

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Close on the dragon's eye and whiskers. Ruer rubs her eyes but the vision stays.

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The dragon-bus opens its doors. Warm light spills onto wet pavement.

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Ruer steps onto the bus. Interior is empty except for rain-blue windows.

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A tiny floating official emerges from near the driver's seat, carrying a scroll.

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The scroll glows and prints a celestial receipt in gold ink.

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The receipt finishes printing. Ruer reads her status.

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Ruer laughs. Her eyes are wet.

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Lotus Scribe floats close, explaining in bureaucratic plain terms.

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The bus-dragon turns its head. Through the window, the city street becomes a misty mountain path.

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Ruer sits heavily. The bus hums. Her reflection is almost normal.

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Lotus Scribe perches on the seat back, scroll balanced on its knees.

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The bus moves through rain. Water-wheel legs turn. Ruer's eyes close.

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The bus stops at Ruer's neighborhood. Doors open.

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Ruer looks back. The bus is ordinary again, driving away.

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Ruer's small apartment. Wet cardigan over a chair. The receipt lies on the table.

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