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Page 1 of chapter 4.

Before dawn in the records hall, Tao Yi sits alone at a low desk under warm lantern light, surrounded by bamboo-slip precedent bundles like weapon racks. His sleeves are tied back; ink stone, brush, and ruler are arranged with ritual precis

Page 2 of chapter 4.

Panel 1: Tao Yi grinds ink in a slow circular motion. Panel 2: he copies an old boundary-stone ruling in tiny characters. Panel 3: he places a completed slip into a neat evidence stack labeled Accepted by Mountain Court.

Page 3 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Tao Yi leans over piles of old small-case records, face lit by the lamp, child body dwarfed by the documents. Bottom panel: close on labels reading Boundary Stones, Water Rights, Tribute Beans, Field Spirit Reclamation.

Page 4 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Mei Qing peers over a stack of precedent slips taller than her head, face visible with a dry eye-roll. Bottom panel: Tao Yi sits behind a wall of bamboo bundles, only his eyes and white hair streak visible above them.

Page 5 of chapter 4.

A corridor outside the records hall: elegant unnamed elders in embroidered robes pass in conversation, glowing faintly with cultivation aura. Tao Yi walks below their sightline carrying a plain document box, face calm, not looking up at any

Page 6 of chapter 4.

Top panel: A small spiritual notary stall near the lower market, with plain paper talismans, a red seal pad, and bamboo shelves; Tao Yi stands at the counter. Bottom panel: two jars of pickled plums sit beside stamped witness papers and a n

Page 7 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Tao Yi holds three witness papers under lamplight, one stamped slightly crooked. Bottom panel: his brush writes a tiny side note: Seal variance acknowledged, not material to filing validity.

Page 8 of chapter 4.

The completed petition lies on a desk surrounded by precedent slips, witness papers, string, and a plain stone paperweight. The text is mostly covered by Tao Yi's sleeve and folding board; the document appears formal, dense, and dangerous w

Page 9 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Mei Qing folds the petition with sharp, perfect corners, face visible and focused on the geometry, not the words. Bottom panel: Tao Yi's hand keeps the written side covered with a blank blotting sheet while she works; his black c

Page 10 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Tao Yi and Mei Qing stand at a small mountain shrine below Sui Peak in lavender morning mist; no ornate altar, only stone steps, pine roots, and a plain roof. Bottom panel: a dented plain iron brazier with old ash, practical and

Page 11 of chapter 4.

Top panel: Tao Yi places the folded petition and stamped witness papers into the iron brazier with both hands. Bottom panel: a taper touches the paper corner; the flame catches cleanly, orange against grey morning mist.

Page 12 of chapter 4.

The petition burns to white ash in the plain iron brazier. The smoke rises in a perfectly straight column into lavender mountain mist despite wind bending the pine branches. Tao Yi watches from below with an unreadable face; Mei Qing stands

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