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Midnight Neutral Zone
Chapter 4
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Panel 1: Inside the packed convenience store, customers sit on floors between shelves, emergency supplies sorted by handwritten signs; Yubin rubs his eyes behind the counter. Panel 2: Baek stands at the counter holding her caramel, face cal

Panel 3

Panel 1: Yubin places the caramel on a plain white convenience-store microwave plate. Panel 2: His finger presses 9 on the worn keypad; the digital display reads 00:09. Panel 3: The microwave window turns into a black circular void like an

Panel 4

The convenience-store aisles elongate into an impossible corridor, shelves repeating into darkness, all other customers vanished. Only Yubin and Baek stand under a single fluorescent light, isolated from the normal store.

Panel 5

Baek straightens from stooped old woman into an ageless elder with gold hourglass pupils. Her white hair unpins and flows down her back, purple vest dissolving into a dark old manager coat stitched with faded receipt strips. Brass coins spi

Panel 6

Panel 1: Yubin steps back into a shelf of instant coffee, face shocked and angry, scanner raised uselessly. Panel 2: Baek lifts one hand, and a flat blue-black memory window unfolds in the aisle like a receipt, showing a distant city grid.

Panel 7

Panel 1: In Baek's memory window, a clean bright city from another apocalypse cycle shows citizens lined in perfect ration queues under numbered life-minute boards. No one fights; no one smiles. Panel 2: Close-up of Baek's gold hourglass pu

Panel 8

Panel 1: Memory image of strong workers receiving medicine from a glowing counter. Panel 2: Memory image of sick elders outside a sealed door, hands pressed to glass. Panel 3: A child in the memory counts tiny glowing seconds in both hands,

Panel 9

Panel 1: Tight close-up of Yubin's face, teeth clenched, fluorescent light cutting across his white hair streak. Panel 2: Baek stands still in her old manager coat, chin lifted, no defense in her posture.

Panel 10

Above the endless aisle, a vast system interface opens like a cold corporate hiring board. The words WORLD MANAGER VACANCY glow over Yubin and Baek, making them look small beneath its scale.

Panel 11

Panel 1: Baek leans toward Yubin, gold eyes severe, brass coins orbiting her wrist. Panel 2: A system list of current customers appears beside Yubin's shoulder, each name paired with remaining life minutes and estimated usefulness.

Panel 12

Panel 1: The impossible aisle snaps back toward the plain microwave as it dings, caramel softened on the plate. Panel 2: The packed store is normal again; customers continue murmuring, Rian checks battery levels, Minseo labels medicine, Han

Panel 13

Yubin stands alone behind the counter in three-quarter view, staring at the front windows. In the glass reflection, blue lists of customers, life minutes, and usefulness scores overlay the frightened people inside. Outside, Doha's armed fig

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