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Ledger of the Bone Debt
Chapter 4
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Early morning in a misty inner corridor after the bell-tower confrontation. Guards escort Yana back toward the accounting halls while the temple pretends nothing happened.

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The council chamber adjoining the accounting hall. Su Qing and the elder council reassert routine procedure while keeping Yana contained.

Panel 4

The fourth debtor arrives at the side gate, not with dramatic force but with the calm presence of an apothecary.

Panel 5

Inside a side reception room, Wen prepares warm medicinal tea for Yana while she keeps the formal distance of a clerk.

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Yana begins the debtor intake, but Wen states that he is not here to be counted.

Panel 7

Yana explains the limits of a junior reckoner and the danger of unmarking a bone-debt without authority.

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Wen’s familiarity with Yana’s future response unsettles her and forces the past into the room.

Panel 9

Wen reveals that the tool he needs is not a ledger brush, but a mirror.

Panel 10

Yana permits the mirror test to prove Wen wrong, and the hidden mark begins to show.

Panel 11

The crescent mark becomes undeniable, and Wen explains why Yana could not read it herself.

Panel 12

Yana tries to read the mark herself and immediately suffers backlash, proving the trap in its placement.

Panel 13

Yana processes the implication that she is an entry in the very system she serves.

Panel 14

A junior reckoner passes outside, forcing Wen and Yana to conceal the discovery.

Panel 15

Yana dismisses Wen publicly but privately decides she needs the master ledger, not another explanation.

Panel 16

That night, Yana sneaks into the master ledger chamber to search for proof of her hidden mark.

Panel 17

Yana searches through the master ledger for patterns connected to the four debtors and the mark on her neck.

Panel 18

Yana deliberately reads too many old marks in succession, using the backlash to force her blood onto the ledger.

Panel 19

Yana returns to Wen’s sealed page and tries to force it open with the blood-reactive backlash.

Panel 20

Yana’s nosebleed falls directly onto the master ledger, waking concealed writing beneath the sealed page.

Panel 21

The hidden line appears: a promise addressed to Wen, written in Yana’s handwriting and signed with a near-name.

Panel 22

Yana forces Wen to explain what little he can about the promise and why he asked to be unmarked.

Panel 23

The master ledger reacts to the revealed line, sending warning light through the chamber’s bone tablets.

Panel 24

Wen covers the revealed promise, but the warning has already begun. Yana understands the temple now knows she has seen the hidden line.

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