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Panel 2

Nari slumped against the counter, vision swimming from Reyn's drugs. Her hand reaches across the blood-slicked surface toward her backend console. Behind her, Ha-jun's blade clashes against violet spells in a storm of qi.

Panel 3

Nari's hand makes contact with the console. The backend interface blooms around her. Green text streams across her vision as she accesses the publish function.

Panel 4

Nari's memories flash—customer after customer, desperate faces, hungry people who just wanted to live.

Panel 5

The Administrator's offer replays in Nari's mind—'live forever, cook for kings.'

Panel 6

Ha-jun bleeds for her. She remembers him choosing her before she was useful.

Panel 7

Reyn's face—the man who never understood why anyone would refuse him.

Panel 8

Nari's hand moves to the publish function. The interface shows everything she's about to release.

Panel 9

Nari's finger touches the PUBLISH button. One keystroke. Everything changes.

Panel 10

The publish ripples outward. Classed terminals across the city begin to scream with green text.

Panel 11

Close-up on the terminal screens. Green text displays the parasite truth and recipes.

Panel 12

Reyn's face as he watches his monopoly shatter. His expression turns cold with fury.

Panel 13

The Administrator's cold response. A new protocol begins.

Panel 14

Nari's realization—the scarcity died. She's dangerous or free. Or both.

Panel 15

Ha-jun appears at the counter. He sees what she's done. He doesn't ask if she regrets it.

Panel 16

Reyn turns to kill her in his final rage. Ha-jun holds the line.

Panel 17

The duel between Ha-jun and Reyn continues. The food truck becomes a battlefield.

Panel 18

Nari watches from the floor. She's too weak to stand, but she hasn't let go of the ladle.

Panel 19

The first light of dawn breaks through the shattered windows. The city glows green with truth.

Panel 20

Classed survivors across the city react to the truth. Some will come for her. Some will thank her.

Panel 21

Nari's eyes close. She's done. The most exhausting thing she's ever done.

Panel 22

Ha-jun watches over her. He stays. Not because of an oath. Because he chose her.

Panel 23

The Administrator's final message. A warning and a promise.

Panel 24

The city at dawn. Classed survivors reading the truth. The System adapting.

Panel 25

Chapter 9 ends. Nari sleeps. Ha-jun watches. Dawn breaks. The truck waits.

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