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Debt of the Six Lanterns
Chapter 4
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Panel 2

Yu's attic above the noodle stall on a grey morning. Steam seeps through floorboards while the six lanterns hover low around his desk.

Panel 3

Yu prepares to leave, checking his notes and trying to steady his hands before the formal negotiation.

Panel 4

The street climb from the lower ring to the Mu contract hall, shifting from soot and noodles to polished stone and guarded warehouses.

Panel 5

The Mu contract hall, a wealthy merchant venue arranged for public negotiation.

Panel 6

Inside the hall: incense, contract boards, witnesses, and Mu Zhaowen waiting as if presiding over a performance.

Panel 7

The formal opening of the negotiation, with ritual courtesy and contract tools displayed.

Panel 8

Yu tries to force the discussion onto the actual Mu debt, but Mu redirects with social pressure.

Panel 9

Mu publicly draws attention to the smeared third lantern, turning Yu's private fear into public embarrassment.

Panel 10

Mu presents the trap as a reasonable gesture of honesty before negotiation.

Panel 11

Yu remembers the rule of voluntary extinction and feels the bodily consequence behind Mu's polite wording.

Panel 12

Yu resists the urge to react and begins questioning Mu's position.

Panel 13

Mu turns Yu's caution into a public accusation of dishonesty.

Panel 14

Yu nearly reaches toward the third lantern, tempted by the chance that the false debt might vanish.

Panel 15

Yu stops himself and turns the trap into a recordable statement.

Panel 16

Mu, eager to humiliate Yu, repeats the extinction request clearly before witnesses.

Panel 17

Yu confirms that Mu has made extinction a condition of negotiation.

Panel 18

Yu names the precedent that converts Mu's trap into coercive initiation.

Panel 19

Yu explains the precedent plainly while the lanterns react to the legal truth.

Panel 20

The supernatural contract confirms Yu's argument, humiliating Mu before the witnesses.

Panel 21

Mu's public poise breaks for a moment; the room laughs once and then remembers the danger.

Panel 22

Mu retreats from the trap but refuses to resolve the actual Mu debt, leaving Yu's victory incomplete.

Panel 23

Outside the Mu hall at dusk, Yu leaves shaken and finds Bei Ling waiting with a black-edged writ.

Panel 24

Bei Ling delivers the reassignment order and the Bureau's revised schedule.

Panel 25

Bei Ling's official mask cracks as she tells Yu the deadline has been shortened to fourteen days.

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