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Panel 2

Mok-ho canal docks after the khanate auditors have left. Villagers gather near a notice board and moored grain barges under sepia dusk, whispering about the pending audit and the two holdout villages.

Panel 3

Inside the prefecture hall after sunset. Wen and Saeryeon work under oil lamps, surrounded by ledgers and salt slips.

Panel 4

Ma Duksu arrives after sunset, carrying Won Yul's private contract tube like proof of power.

Panel 5

Ma reveals the shape of his threat: unless Won Yul receives a lower share, he will ship upriver in public and ruin the index.

Panel 6

Seo Biran arrives moments later, insisting she is not allied with Ma while applying the same pressure for Heuk-su.

Panel 7

The two holdout leaders deny cooperation but make matching demands. The pressure closes around Wen.

Panel 8

Wen tries to explain the consequence in plain terms: their refusal became useful, but a public reversal would expose the entire index.

Panel 9

Ma and Seo lay out their separate demands for lower shares and written protection.

Panel 10

Saeryeon calls the demand what it is. The headmen respond by threatening public movement that would force the lie into view.

Panel 11

Wen stops negotiating and asks Saeryeon a procedural question. The legal countermeasure begins to form.

Panel 12

Saeryeon explains the rule clearly enough for the headmen and the reader: separate prefectures can be petitioned, but the consequences are immediate and dangerous.

Panel 13

Wen delivers the counter-threat as an official offer: independence at dawn.

Panel 14

Ma initially thinks Wen is offering a victory, until Wen spells out what separation removes.

Panel 15

The legal consequence is made visual: Mok-ho's false poverty no longer shelters the two wealthy-looking villages.

Panel 16

Seo challenges whether Wen can survive the political backlash. Wen answers that the document only needs to be filed.

Panel 17

Wen turns their demand back on them, offering to attach their own written demands as cause for separation.

Panel 18

Seo raises the children in the khan's camp. Wen makes clear that separation would also remove the two villages from Mok-ho's shared hostage petition.

Panel 19

For the first time, the headmen have no clever answer. Wen states the choice in concrete terms.

Panel 20

Ma and Seo leave shaken, neither conceding nor threatening again. Saeryeon watches their retreat.

Panel 21

With the headmen gone, the hall feels colder. Wen's formal posture fails, and Saeryeon refuses to praise him.

Panel 22

Saeryeon reveals that Chief Jang has already filed an extortion charge against Wen in the capital. The warrant is on the road.

Panel 23

Wen realizes the capital accused him of a crime he has only just committed. Saeryeon explains the filed language without revealing more than she knows.

Panel 24

Wen laughs once, badly. The joke collapses under the real timing: dawn, the warrant, and the full moon are all deadlines now.

Panel 25

The chapter ends before dawn. Wen prepares the separation forms but has not sealed them. Saeryeon remains with him as the first light reaches the hall.

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