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Early morning at Mok-ho's canal road. Mist, reed roofs, and a watch bell. Khanate riders approach before expected.

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Inside the prefecture workroom, Wen and Saeryeon are still working through the unfinished index when the bell sounds.

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The khanate audit party enters the prefecture courtyard with three officials and armed guards.

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Wen and Saeryeon meet the auditors at the prefecture hall entrance. Borchu translates between the khanate auditors and Pyung officials.

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The unfinished index is placed on the main audit table. Wen must admit that shipments are still in motion.

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Sorgan starts with the upriver shipment records, the first formula blade the false poverty must survive.

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Wen explains the route shift plainly: the audit sees upriver wealth, not downriver hunger on paper.

Panel 9

The upriver record check passes because the low numbers are backed by real movement.

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Temur begins the grain quality test. The lie depends on the cargo being genuine.

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Temur burns the grain dust. The test checks whether the cargo was substituted or diluted.

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Temur finds no substitution. The second formula blade passes.

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The room expects the audit to continue smoothly, but Borchu stops at the salt-grain ratio column.

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Borchu asks why salt is cheaper than last spring. The question exposes the most fragile part of the index.

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Borchu explains why the salt price matters: if the ratio is unnatural, the whole poverty pattern can be rejected.

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Wen answers with the true fact inside the lie: two villages refused to ship with the coordinated route.

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Wen explains the glut in concrete terms so the auditors can see how the price fell without a fake mine or route change.

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The named refusal becomes visible in the room. Ma Duksu and Seo Biran react as their private choices are used as evidence.

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Borchu tries to turn the explanation against Wen by asking why refusal does not prove hidden wealth instead.

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Borchu writes down Wen's explanation, not as an acquittal but as a note he can use later. No later plot secrets are revealed.

Panel 21

The three auditors confer. Sorgan and Temur cannot disprove the records, while Borchu recommends a pending status.

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Borchu translates the audit verdict: Mok-ho is not condemned today, but the case remains pending until the next full moon.

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The verdict spreads outside. Villagers feel relief and dread at the same time.

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The auditors prepare to leave the prefecture for now. Borchu leaves Wen with a mild warning about the full moon.

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After the auditors leave, Wen and Saeryeon face the pending mark and the unfinished work ahead.

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