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The Name on the Last Page
Chapter 2
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Panel 2

Saint-Maur archive room after midnight: dust, lace curtains, stacked correspondence boxes, and a locked central cabinet. Candlelight is warm but thin.

Panel 3

The archive's portrait wall and family record table.

Panel 4

Heléne lays out tools, old guild receipts, and written favors across the archive table.

Panel 5

The archive room becomes a frantic workspace.

Panel 6

Heléne attacks the locked drawers using called-in tools.

Panel 7

Inside the first cabinet: ribbons, account books, estate correspondence, and sealed packets.

Panel 8

Hours pass in the same archive room; papers now carpet the floor.

Panel 9

The first hidden packet reveals a love letter from Odette to A.W.

Panel 10

Heléne reads deeper into the love letter.

Panel 11

Heléne checks seals, dates, and initials against family records.

Panel 12

Heléne checks the date against her mother's birth record.

Panel 13

A second hidden space is found behind the cabinet backing.

Panel 14

Heléne opens the second packet and immediately sees a different hand from Odette's.

Panel 15

The threat letter explains the demand for a future collectible debt.

Panel 16

Heléne realizes how the letters reduced her mother to proof and collateral.

Panel 17

Tempted, Heléne opens the ledger to Odette's name.

Panel 18

Heléne nearly crosses out Odette's name, then refuses the cost.

Panel 19

Heléne reads Aurel's offer in the archive room.

Panel 20

Heléne dissects Aurel's offer for traps.

Panel 21

The old Wassen debt in the ledger makes its pull known again.

Panel 22

Heléne chooses what evidence to take to Wassen.

Panel 23

Heléne faces Odette and Mireille's portraits before leaving the archive.

Panel 24

Dawn touches the Saint-Maur archive as Heléne leaves for Wassen on her own terms.

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