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The Name on the Last Page
Chapter 1
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Panel 2

Late-night Saint-Maur townhouse library, warm candlelight, contract stacks, rain against tall windows, and a small birthday note half-buried under work.

Panel 3

Heléne pushes ordinary paperwork aside to reveal the Saint-Maur Ledger hidden under cloth.

Panel 4

Heléne opens the ledger and counts the remaining blank pages.

Panel 5

The library wall shows Odette's portrait while Heléne checks the inherited debt rules without crossing anything out.

Panel 6

Heléne finds the old Wassen debit line that will come due at majority.

Panel 7

Midnight arrives exactly as Heléne turns twenty-one.

Panel 8

Heléne opens the front door to a sealed carriage and Lord Aurel Wassen.

Panel 9

Aurel presents the receipt case at the threshold while Heléne refuses to be intimidated by ceremony.

Panel 10

The Saint-Maur Ledger recognizes the original receipt and displays the matching debt line.

Panel 11

Aurel proposes voluntary transfer instead of force.

Panel 12

Heléne asks practical questions, forcing the offer into plain terms.

Panel 13

Heléne notices the role clause left dangerously open.

Panel 14

Aurel explains the legal effect after Heléne identifies it, and Heléne states the danger plainly.

Panel 15

Heléne refuses the voluntary transfer and separates Aurel's manners from the contract's power.

Panel 16

Aurel insists he would not exploit the clause; Heléne answers that paper matters more than intention.

Panel 17

The ledger begins to press the overdue debt, and Heléne bargains for time.

Panel 18

Aurel grants more time than Heléne asks, under strict deadline terms.

Panel 19

Heléne understands what the red outline means: the ledger has reserved a place for her.

Panel 20

Aurel explains the deadline and leaves Heléne enough proof to investigate.

Panel 21

Aurel departs, still polite and still dangerous because of what he represents.

Panel 22

After the carriage leaves, Heléne returns to the library and senses the debt tugging at her body.

Panel 23

Heléne realizes the ledger has already started drawing her toward Wassen despite the delay.

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