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The Twelfth Bride of Songhe Pass
Chapter 3
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Panel 2

Grandmother's main room before sunrise; cold blue-grey light through cracked shutters, funeral papers pushed aside, Du Heng's annotated registry half-visible in Wen's satchel.

Panel 3

Wen begins with obvious hiding places in the old house: floorboards, bed frame, shrine table.

Panel 4

The roof beams and hanging herb bundles reveal the house's practical dangers.

Panel 5

Wen checks old veterinary bottles and medicine jars stored near farm tools.

Panel 6

Grandmother's yard and chicken shed; the behavior of animals points Wen away from the house interior.

Panel 7

A mark on the feed sack triggers Wen's memory of her grandmother's old rules.

Panel 8

Wen opens the grey corn sack and finds it packed to protect a hidden bundle.

Panel 9

Inside the grandmother's house again, Wen unwraps the hidden book on the table beside the public registry.

Panel 10

Wen reads the ledger's format and realizes it is bureaucratic, not romantic or ceremonial.

Panel 11

The meaning of the bride list begins to invert in Wen's mind.

Panel 12

A contract note in the ledger explains the village rule in plain procedural terms.

Panel 13

Wen reads entries showing how the contract is used to decide water, land, and which families are vulnerable.

Panel 14

Wen finds a set of entries that name women not listed on the public bride wall.

Panel 15

The ledger implicates Wen's grandmother directly as a deputy recorder.

Panel 16

Wen reads the entry her grandmother made for Wen's grandfather's death.

Panel 17

Wen processes the double injury: grandmother as participant and preserver of evidence.

Panel 18

Wen finds newer inserts that connect death records to pharmacy supplies.

Panel 19

The ledger shows entries after Luo Qing stopped being called wife, connecting her survival to recordkeeping.

Panel 20

Wen decides what to take and what to leave, balancing proof against danger.

Panel 21

Wen leaves grandmother's house and heads toward the village pharmacy before the village fully wakes.

Panel 22

At the pharmacy, Luo Qing receives Wen before Old Pharmacist Gan opens the shop front.

Panel 23

Wen presses Luo Qing for a plain answer about the ledger's purpose.

Panel 24

Luo Qing gives Wen the operational truth of the death accounting without dressing it as legend.

Panel 25

Wen exits the pharmacy with confirmation that the evidence leads to the Du altar.

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