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The Pawnshop on Ren-Hai Bridge
Chapter 2
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Panel 2

Outside the Han pawnshop before business hours, rain and bridge fog flatten the city into hard grey shapes. Xinyu prepares to follow the address from Luo Wensheng's receipt.

Panel 3

Xinyu watches Luo Wensheng's home from across a wet alley as the morning bell sounds.

Panel 4

Luo walks from the residential district toward the Salt Commission while Xinyu tails him at a careful distance.

Panel 5

At the Salt Commission gate, Xinyu is reminded that the law prevents a simple accusation.

Panel 6

Xinyu observes Luo at work from outside the Salt Commission.

Panel 7

Luo behaves like an ordinary conflict-avoidant clerk during a workplace dispute.

Panel 8

Luo eats alone beneath a stairwell while Xinyu watches from a service corridor.

Panel 9

Xinyu reviews the consequence of memory collateral while observing Luo's blank ordinariness.

Panel 10

At dusk, Luo leaves work and buys cheap bean cakes on the way home.

Panel 11

Luo returns home to his family, and the children's welcome unsettles Xinyu.

Panel 12

Xinyu observes Luo's family dinner from outside and finds no visible guilt.

Panel 13

Xinyu returns after dark to the quiet pawnshop.

Panel 14

Xinyu tends to Meilin before turning to the ledgers.

Panel 15

Xinyu approaches Han Jingbo's portrait, where the second ledger is hidden.

Panel 16

Xinyu retrieves and opens Han Jingbo's private second ledger.

Panel 17

Xinyu reviews what the public ledger can and cannot tell her.

Panel 18

Xinyu finds the private ledger entry connected to the year of her father's murder.

Panel 19

The calm wording of the private ledger entry unsettles Xinyu more than a confession would have.

Panel 20

Xinyu searches for Cabinet B among old stored collateral.

Panel 21

Xinyu locates Lot 47 inside Cabinet B.

Panel 22

Xinyu touches the sealed vessels and senses only outer emotional signatures.

Panel 23

Xinyu considers breaking the seals but understands the cost to the shop and Meilin.

Panel 24

Xinyu locks away Lot 47 and records that one of the five has returned through Luo's new transaction.

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