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Black screen with crimson text. The chapter title 'THE COURT' appears in heavy serif font, flickering like dying neon. Below it, in smaller text: 'A standing reservation has no end date.'

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The opera house exterior rises against a bruised purple sky. Mo Yan's truck parked at the entrance. The building is magnificent in decay — pillars cracked, roof partially caved, but the entrance still grand.

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Mo Yan climbs the steps of the opera house. The interior is vast — a collapsed ceiling lets starlight through. Furniture scattered like fallen soldiers.

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Mo Yan enters the dining room. The first view — grandeur preserved in decay. Crystal chandeliers hang crooked but still lit. A long table set with real cloth, polished silver, crystal glasses.

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Close-up on the table setting. Real cloth, tarnished silver, crystal glasses. Then Mo Yan's hands placing a System-provided ingredient container on the side table — his cooking station prepared.

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The zombie court begins to arrive and seat themselves. Well-dressed figures in evening wear, suits, traditional clothing. Each with crimson eyes of varying brightness. They move with preserved grace.

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A young girl zombie enters and sits nearest the door. She looks eight years old, in a torn pink dress, crimson eyes ancient and young. Nearby, the food editor zombie observes Mo Yan with professional interest.

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Mo Yan begins his cooking. The kitchen alcove is modest but functional. The System pantry glows behind him. He begins preparing the first course.

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The retired general zombie is introduced — seated at the table, military bearing intact, watching everything. Then the first course arrives — served by Mo Yan to the court.

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The food editor tastes the soup and begins her professional critique. She is precise, devastating, but ultimately approving.

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The general finally reaches for his bowl. His hands are steady, precise, military. The weight of his gaze shifts from Mo Yan to the food.

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Mo Yan approaches the child zombie with the main course. She refuses — pushing the plate away, shaking her head. Her crimson eyes are wet with something that shouldn't exist anymore.

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Mo Yan returns to the kitchen. He reaches into the System pantry and produces a simple dumpling. Not fancy. Not elaborate. Just... dumplings. He returns to the child.

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The child zombie takes a bite of the dumpling. She begins to cry — not the mechanical tears of the dead, but real, broken sobs. She remembers.

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Madame Qing begins to explain. She's seated, fingers steepled, candlelight casting shadows across her porcelain face. Mo Yan stands across from her, listening.

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Madame Qing explains the System's truth — ratings are memory, memory is identity. Without ratings, the dead lose themselves.

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Madame Qing reveals the System's indifference — it cannot and does not distinguish between human and zombie. Currency is currency.

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A high-grade zombie places a glowing mutant core on the table as payment. The core pulses with green light. Madame Qing explains — cores are worth more than human currency.

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Mo Yan continues serving course after course. The banquet is in full swing. Plates cleared, new plates served. The court is satisfied.

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The rating system activates for the court. Five-star ratings float above each zombie's head, glowing gold. The System HUD shows accumulated five-star reviews.

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The new tool unlocks — a cleaver. The System pantry opens to reveal it, gleaming in the golden light. Mo Yan examines it with professional appreciation.

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The court disperses. Madame Qing bids Mo Yan farewell at the opera house entrance. The night ends. Five stars echo in his memory.

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Mo Yan drives away from the opera house. Dawn is breaking on the horizon — purple bleeding to orange. His face in the rearview mirror is exhausted but thoughtful.

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The truck passes the survivor camp on the horizon. Morning light reveals tents and campfires. The System HUD shows ratings accumulated. The cleaver sits in the kitchen, waiting.

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