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Panel 2

Establishing shot of the survivor camp from Mo Yan's perspective through the truck's grimy windshield. A cluster of ragged tents and makeshift shelters surrounds a dying fire. Gray morning light. The truck's engine ticks.

Panel 3

Mo Yan exits the truck and opens the service window. The survivor camp notices. Faces turn toward him. The camp commander approaches from the center of the camp, hand on his weapon.

Panel 4

Confrontation at the truck. The commander reaches the window, hand still on weapon. Mo Yan stands his ground. Tension.

Panel 5

Mo Yan offers a solution. He gestures to the kitchen behind him. Offers to feed the commander.

Panel 6

Mo Yan ladles broth into a cup and slides it across the counter. The commander eyes it suspiciously. Steam rises.

Panel 7

Commander tests the broth for poison. He uses a field testing kit, watching carefully.

Panel 8

Commander takes a sip of the broth. His expression changes. Surprise. Then approval.

Panel 9

Commander grants permission. He steps back from the window, hand leaving his weapon.

Panel 10

Lin Shu appears at the window with a bowl. She smiles. The first genuine smile Mo Yan has seen in the camp.

Panel 11

Mo Yan looks at Lin Shu. Something flickers in his expression. Then he turns to the kitchen.

Panel 12

The System pantry reveals itself. Impossible ingredients: sterile water, perfect rice, seasonings that glow faintly.

Panel 13

Mo Yan cooks. His hands move with precision and speed. The kitchen becomes a blur of motion.

Panel 14

The survivor camp crowd forms a line. Twenty to thirty people. Tin cups and bowls extended. Faces hopeful and hollow.

Panel 15

Survivors eat. Faces change. Desperation becomes gratitude. A child smiles.

Panel 16

More survivors eating. The System HUD shows ratings accumulating. Five stars. Five stars. Five stars.

Panel 17

Night falls. The camp settles. The truck's neon sign flickers in the darkness.

Panel 18

Inside the truck, night. Mo Yan sits at the counter. The System HUD pulses. New destination unlocked.

Panel 19

Mo Yan stares at the destination prompt. Hesitation. His hands grip the steering wheel.

Panel 20

Mo Yan starts the engine. The truck moves. The camp fades in the rearview mirror.

Panel 21

The truck approaches the opera house. It looms like a broken cathedral against the night sky.

Panel 22

Mo Yan parks the truck. He stares at the opera house entrance. The grand doors hang open.

Panel 23

Mo Yan enters the opera house. The dining hall. Candlelight flickers on crystal chandeliers.

Panel 24

The zombie court reveals itself. Well-dressed figures with crimson eyes. They turn to look at Mo Yan.

Panel 25

Madame Qing at the head of the table. Fingers steepled. Smiling with perfect manners.

Panel 26

Madame Qing speaks. The court watches. Mo Yan stands in the doorway.

Panel 27

Final panel. The court waits. Mo Yan steps forward. The first course begins.

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