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The Replacement of Lady Sera
Chapter 5
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Panel 2

The monthly Tessen memorial begins in the candlelit memorial hall, all cold stone, coffin, black veils, and guarded doors.

Panel 3

In a side alcove just before the ceremony, Althene gives Mire the last practical instructions for the reading.

Panel 4

Althene drills Mire through the prayer sounds, making the rule and its danger plain.

Panel 5

The exits and the cost of failure are made visible before Mire steps into the hall.

Panel 6

Althene reinforces the bargain and the stakes for Alaric before the ceremony calls them out.

Panel 7

The bells begin, and Mire must leave the alcove for the public aisle.

Panel 8

Mire passes the front pew, where Veyra and Orven wait close enough to enforce the contract.

Panel 9

The ceremonial coffin becomes a symbol of the layered deaths Mire is carrying.

Panel 10

Domnal appears by the lectern, unreadable and already positioned near the book.

Panel 11

The priestly call establishes the public ritual and why Mire must read.

Panel 12

Mire commits to the right lectern and the trained performance of Sera.

Panel 13

Domnal takes the book before Mire can, forcing an intimate and dangerous exchange.

Panel 14

Mire answers with a line that works too well, and Domnal’s attention changes.

Panel 15

Domnal finally gives Mire the memorial book, with the ribbon still apparently in place.

Panel 16

Mire discovers the marked page has been replaced with her private letter to Alaric.

Panel 17

The letter’s words drag Mire back to the private promise she made to Alaric.

Panel 18

The people who understand the danger begin to react while the crowd waits for the reading.

Panel 19

Mire looks up and sees that Domnal is not surprised.

Panel 20

Mire understands the trap was prepared, not improvised.

Panel 21

The hall presses Mire toward a choice while each faction waits for a different outcome.

Panel 22

Mire’s possible choices present themselves, each disastrous.

Panel 23

Domnal forces the silence to narrow without making an accusation aloud.

Panel 24

Veyra, Orven, the guards, and the crowd make clear that the room itself will punish the wrong choice.

Panel 25

The chapter ends in the silent instant before Mire chooses what to read or reveal.

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