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The Replacement of Lady Sera
Chapter 2
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Panel 2

A black bridal carriage approaches the Tessen estate through autumn fog and iron gates.

Panel 3

The carriage passes through the gates and Mire remembers the stakes attached to every mistake.

Panel 4

Mire steps down into a courtyard lined with servants who bow too deeply.

Panel 5

Domnal Tessen appears at the top of the courtyard steps and greets Mire without touching her.

Panel 6

Domnal studies Mire more like evidence than a bride.

Panel 7

Mire is led into the estate hall, where the house seems to watch her.

Panel 8

Lady Veyra takes control of the arrival and the public story.

Panel 9

Lady Althene greets Mire with a knowing smile that unsettles her.

Panel 10

Mire realizes Althene may see performance where others see rank.

Panel 11

Domnal escorts Mire deeper into the marital wing while maintaining an unsettling distance.

Panel 12

Mire sees the bridal chamber and the objects chosen for Sera.

Panel 13

Domnal proposes private tea, and Mire understands it as a test.

Panel 14

A servant brings private tea as Mire prepares to rely on Sera’s diary.

Panel 15

Domnal asks about a book from the letters; Mire answers from the diary.

Panel 16

Mire survives another question about the season of the courtship.

Panel 17

Domnal asks about Sera’s phrase for bad weather, and Mire answers correctly.

Panel 18

Mire thinks she is succeeding, but hunger and exhaustion begin to weaken her control.

Panel 19

Mire tries to turn the mistake into a harmless choice before Domnal can name it.

Panel 20

Mire answers with a safe line, and Domnal’s almost-kind smile deepens the threat.

Panel 21

Domnal ends the tea politely, leaving Mire unsure whether she passed or failed.

Panel 22

Alone, Mire’s performance cracks and she spits out the cardamom.

Panel 23

Mire finds Domnal’s untouched bitter cake and handwritten note, unable to tell if it is kindness or a trap.

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