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The Mourner Who Forgets
Chapter 4
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A receiving hall in the capital. Yan Jiu sits at a low table. Servants bring gifts — jade, silk, a ceremonial blade. His expression is politely attentive, his ledger open on the table.

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Yan Jiu examines the gifts one by one, making notes in his ledger. Each gift represents a faction's bid for his loyalty.

Panel 4

A shadowed meeting place. A figure in silk — the buyer — confronts Yan Jiu. The atmosphere is tense, contractual.

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The buyer presses Yan Jiu about the original contract. The tension escalates as the buyer demands completion.

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Yan Jiu speaks to the buyer, agreeing to complete the contract. His face is unreadable.

Panel 7

Yan Jiu alone in his room, preparing. The poisoner's recipe — extracted from a corpse in chapter 3 — is spread before him.

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Yan Jiu mixes the poison into the wine. The flask takes on a faint golden sheen, then returns to normal.

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The banquet hall. A grand chamber with a long table. Yan Jiu enters, carrying the flagon.

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The faction leaders watch Yan Jiu approach. The tension is palpable — these are rivals who would destroy each other given the chance.

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Yan Jiu begins to pour. First cup — for the second prince's faction. The wine flows like liquid shadow.

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Yan Jiu continues pouring. The cup for the buyer. The cup for the third prince's representative.

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The flagon empties. Every cup has been poured. Every faction leader holds wine. Yan Jiu raises his own cup — filled with plain wine.

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The toast. Every faction leader drinks. For a moment, the hall is united in ceremony.

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The first signs. The general in armor clutches his chest. His face goes pale.

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Chaos. The faction leaders begin to fall, one by one. The poison works with terrible efficiency.

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The buyer. They have realized. They clutch the table edge, fighting the poison.

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Yan Jiu responds to the buyer. The god inside him stirs.

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The last of the faction leaders falls. Silence. Yan Jiu stands alone in a hall of corpses.

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Yan Jiu walks among the dead. He pauses at the buyer's body.

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Yan Jiu stands. The god's presence is strong. He is no longer mourning — he is claiming.

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Guards enter the hall. They see the carnage. They see Yan Jiu standing untouched.

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Yan Jiu addresses the guards. His voice is calm, measured, like a eulogy.

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The guards accept his story. The regency is his. The empire will mourn — and he will lead the mourning.

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Yan Jiu alone. The god inside him purrs. His shadow moves wrong. The chapter ends on this image of terrible power.

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