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媒神怨 (The Matchmaker God's Wrath)
Chapter 6
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Festival street at night. Lanterns glow red and gold above crowded hanfu bodies. The Matchmaker Temple is visible in the distance, its multi-tiered roof silhouetted against the star-scattered sky. Red ribbons hang from every eave.

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Qing He and Ling Suyin pause at a narrow intersection. The crowd flows around them like water around stones.

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In the crowded festival, a woman appears — translucent, flickering, her face blurred like a half-remembered dream. She smiles and reaches toward Qing He.

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Qing He forces himself to look away. The illusion flickers. He walks forward, jaw tight.

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Across the festival street, Ling Suyin stops. Before her, a village materializes — small wooden houses, paper lanterns, smoke rising from cooking fires. Children play in the dirt. A woman calls a name.

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Ling Suyin closes her eyes. She walks forward, directly through the illusion. The village dissolves around her like morning mist.

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A young man in Crimson Abyss disciple robes pushes through the crowd toward Qing He. His face is tear-streaked. He calls Qing He's name.

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The false Xiao Feng reaches Qing He and grasps his arm, pleading. Qing He looks down at the hand on his arm.

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Qing He pulls his arm free and walks away. The false Xiao Feng's expression crumbles — and then the illusion dissolves like wet paper.

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A festival official runs toward Ling Suyin, waving a summons seal. 'Holy Maiden! Demonic cultivators are attacking the temple district! We need your blessing!'

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The official's form flickers and dissolves. Ling Suyin walks on without breaking stride. The second trap crumbles to red ribbons.

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The festival crowd becomes impossibly dense. Red ribbons tie themselves around ankles. People cannot move.

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Qing He and Ling Suyin release qi pressure. The crowd parts instinctively, people stumbling back with wide eyes.

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A merchant's cart appears blocking the street — it wasn't there a moment ago. Qing He stares at it.

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Qing He lifts the cart with one hand and hurls it aside. Wheels spin. The oxen bleat. The cart crashes into a shopfront.

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A gate that should be open is locked. Iron bars. Heavy chains. Ling Suyin examines it.

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Qing He steps forward and punches the gate. The iron shatters. Divine threads unravel with a sound like breaking strings.

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An alley. The Wandering Matchmaker kneels in the street. Around her, love-charms are dying — turning black, crumbling, falling.

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The Wandering Matchmaker rises unsteadily. Her voice breaks. 'You are destined. You are the chosen ones. The god chose you because you are meant to be together.'

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Ling Suyin takes the old woman's hands. 'Love is not a resource to be harvested for a prophecy. You deserve to love freely — not as a servant to a god's plan.'

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The Wandering Matchmaker's face crumples. She looks at the ash in her hands — the crumbled remains of a love-charm. 'Then what... what was it all for?'

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Qing He walks past without stopping. He does not look at the Wandering Matchmaker. He does not look at Ling Suyin.

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Behind them, the Wandering Matchmaker slowly rises. She looks at the ash in her hands. Something shifts in her eyes — the first crack in sixty years of faith.

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High above the festival district, the sky turns the color of a fresh bruise. A sound like breaking strings echoes from somewhere divine.

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