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The Marker on Her Skin
Chapter 5
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Panel 2

Morning at the service entrance to the Tan junket office inside the Sapphire Suite. Cold blue-grey walls, black glass, hard overhead light.

Panel 3

Security checkpoint outside the junket office. Scanner panel, badge reader, glass doors.

Panel 4

Inside the Tan junket office: glass partitions, printers, stamp pads, locked drawers, clerks behind counters.

Panel 5

Mak Mei-Lin's glass audit office, shadowed and precise, lined with locked document cabinets.

Panel 6

Inside Mak's office. Glass wall behind Hayun, desk between the women.

Panel 7

Mak's desk as Hayun opens the dossier and begins the evidence sequence.

Panel 8

The evidence expands across Mak's desk: camera logs, corridor map, maintenance overwrite notice.

Panel 9

Witness-statement documents and thumbprint comparisons on Mak's desk.

Panel 10

Personnel files and old dealer records related to prior marked dealers.

Panel 11

Comp-card records and creditor ledger extracts are added to the evidence spread.

Panel 12

Mak reads the dossier in silence while Hayun stands across from her desk.

Panel 13

Mak finishes reading and asks her first substantive question.

Panel 14

Mak identifies the financial significance of the camera overwrite.

Panel 15

Mak initiates an audit lock from her office.

Panel 16

Across the casino, outside Liang's floor-manager office. Door scanner, tablet, cold corridor light.

Panel 17

Liang's corridor and a security terminal listing active floor managers.

Panel 18

Mak's audit monitor displays Hayun's marker account moving between creditor channels.

Panel 19

Mak closes the audit console. Hayun understands the debt has changed hands.

Panel 20

Mak presents a written contract instead of a clearance notice.

Panel 21

Hayun reads the terms: Monday hosted-room work for one year, no comp, no private betting.

Panel 22

Mak lists what she will protect in exchange for Hayun's year of Mondays.

Panel 23

Hayun processes the offer and what Monday nights mean for her sobriety.

Panel 24

The contract waits for Hayun's signature. Mak offers no comfort.

Panel 25

Hayun reaches for the pen. The chapter ends before the signature is made.

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