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The Geomantic Postal Route
Chapter 2
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Panel 2

A cold dawn road beyond Liangzhou. The western route narrows across snowy ridges as Yan Qi runs toward the second delivery with the parcel case strapped tight.

Panel 3

Yan Qi stops at a fork in the route and tests whether she can avoid the second delivery by choosing another road.

Panel 4

On the route edge, Yan Qi considers letting the parcel case fall into a ravine.

Panel 5

A small night relay station under lanterns. Couriers rest horses and spirit-cranes while Yan Qi tries a procedural escape.

Panel 6

Yan Qi leaves the relay station before dawn, haunted by Magistrate Zhao's death and by the letter she already sent to the inspector general line.

Panel 7

Yan Qi studies the second parcel's manifest as the route deadline glows brighter.

Panel 8

The route reaches the battlefield gorge below the remote shrine.

Panel 9

Yan Qi climbs the last steps through bleached prayer flags and reaches the shrine gate.

Panel 10

Inside the shrine, a woman answers from near the altar before Yan Qi sees her clearly.

Panel 11

Madam Ren turns to receive Yan Qi. The shrine's mourning atmosphere becomes personal and tense.

Panel 12

Yan Qi and Madam Ren perform the required delivery ritual before the parcel can be opened.

Panel 13

Madam Ren asks a simple question that unsettles Yan Qi more than accusation would have.

Panel 14

Madam Ren opens the parcel, revealing the recovered spirit-tablet inside.

Panel 15

Yan Qi remembers battlefield courier training with her father, where he taught her to recognize touch-curses on recovered relics.

Panel 16

Back in the shrine, Yan Qi moves to stop Madam Ren but the oath punishes interference with accepted mail.

Panel 17

Yan Qi completes the legal delivery and uses the one freedom still left to her: speech.

Panel 18

Madam Ren responds as if Yan Qi has only confirmed something she already chose to face.

Panel 19

Madam Ren touches the spirit-tablet and activates the hidden mechanism.

Panel 20

The curse transforms into a maplike projection above the shrine altar.

Panel 21

The projected coordinate stabilizes, then brands itself into Yan Qi's inner sight before fading.

Panel 22

Madam Ren reveals the concealed talisman armor beneath her mourning robes and identifies herself as a counter-agent.

Panel 23

Madam Ren explains the minimum: some parcels are murders, some are signals, and Yan Qi's route is being used because it is legally protected.

Panel 24

Yan Qi demands a way out. Madam Ren explains why continuing is the only useful path left.

Panel 25

Yan Qi leaves the shrine with the coordinate in her memory and the next delivery window beginning to pull at her oath.

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