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Panel 2

Night. The food truck sits alone in the ruined city's darkness. A single light glows from inside. No customers. No movement. Just Nari and the hum of her backend console.

Panel 3

Nari navigates to the backend. The System interface materializes—green text, cascading code, the cold architecture of the world.

Panel 4

Nari opens the Cook tag. The first layer of code is innocuous—recipe formatting, ingredient references. But underneath, something else.

Panel 5

Nari opens the DE-CONVERSION PROTOCOL. The code reveals its purpose. Her face drains of color.

Panel 6

Close-up on key lines of code. The parasitic nature of the Class shimmer is revealed in plain text.

Panel 7

Nari scrolls further. The scope of the farming operation becomes clear. Every Classed human. All of them.

Panel 8

Nari's mind races. The customers. All those desperate faces. Every single one of them is on a timer.

Panel 9

Nari scrolls to find information about her own recipes. What makes them different. Why they work.

Panel 10

The full weight of what she is crashes down on Nari. She is the only one. The bottleneck.

Panel 11

Nari tries to process. The math doesn't work. Seven billion people. One cook.

Panel 12

Nari's mind spirals. Every bowl she's ever served. Every person she chose to save without knowing it.

Panel 13

The Administrator's interface pings. A cold notification. It knows she looked.

Panel 14

Nari closes the console. She's seen enough. Maybe too much. The weight of it presses down.

Panel 15

Time passes. Dawn approaches. Nari hasn't moved. The first gray light seeps through the truck windows.

Panel 16

A shadow falls across the truck counter. Ha-jun has arrived. He's been watching.

Panel 17

Ha-jun speaks. His voice is low, quiet. He already knows what she found.

Panel 18

Ha-jun confirms it. He's known since the beginning. Since bowl one.

Panel 19

Ha-jun explains about his oath. The Sword Saint code that binds him to protect anomalies.

Panel 20

Ha-jun elaborates. The Sword Saints know about the System's true nature. They always have.

Panel 21

Ha-jun continues. The Sword Saints knew the Classes were a trap. They were created to fight it.

Panel 22

Ha-jun's expression shifts slightly. There's something more. Something he hasn't said.

Panel 23

Ha-jun elaborates. He chose her the moment he tasted her food. Not because of what she could do. Because of who she was.

Panel 24

Nari asks about the oath. What oath. What exactly binds him to her.

Panel 25

Ha-jun doesn't answer. He never answers. He just... stays. The mystery of the oath hangs in the air as dawn breaks.

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