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House Special: Last Order Before the End
Chapter 3
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Dusk over the ruined city. The LAST ORDER food truck sits in a pool of dim light, neon sign flickering. Nari wipes down the counter inside, exhausted.

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Nari checks her inventory console, reviewing the day's stats and ingredient counts.

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The wind picks up outside. Nari glances toward the truck entrance, sensing something.

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A figure appears at the edge of the truck's light. Tall. Imposing. Silhouetted against the dark.

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Ha-jun steps into fuller view. His wounds are visible now—blood on his armor, exhaustion in every line of his body.

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Nari takes in his wounds. Her assessment shifts from wariness to concern.

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Ha-jun sits at the counter—a massive figure somehow folded into the small space. He speaks for the first time.

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Nari points to the truck's sign. Ha-jun's eyes follow her gesture.

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Nari cooks. The familiar ritual of her element.

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She serves the ramen. Ha-jun watches the bowl arrive.

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Ha-jun eats. The ramen disappears in efficient, desperate swallows.

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Ha-jun stops mid-bite. His eyes snap open. Something has changed.

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Ha-jun's internal view—the System interface showing the buff duration compared to normal.

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Ha-jun speaks. His voice is low, measured, certain.

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Nari's confusion. She doesn't know what he's talking about.

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Ha-jun moves toward the truck entrance. His posture shifts—watchful, protective.

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Ha-jun takes position outside the truck, watching the shadows.

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Nari inside the truck, watching him through the window. Her thoughts swirl.

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Night settles. Ha-jun remains motionless at his post.

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Nari's inventory console glows as she reviews her recipes before sleep.

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Nari looks toward the window, toward where Ha-jun stands guard.

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Nari falls asleep. The night belongs to Ha-jun's watch.

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Dawn breaks. Ha-jun is still there, unmoved.

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Closing shot. Nari opens the truck for the morning. Ha-jun remains at his post.

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